Shrinking Violet - Why you shouldn't use babelfish for your book

So first of all let me say that I didn't like this book. At all. It was predictable and the plot was very weak. Since I always say the first sentence has to pull you in and try to do that in my story here's the first sentence: You're listening to Sweet T on 92.7 WEMD SLAM FM. These little quotes from the radio are in every chapter the real chapter begins with: "Until a few years ago, I always dreamed that a radio station would be a sleek glass architectural gem on Ocean View." Kinda boring huh? I mean I for one have seen radio stations in bigger citys so that's really no news for me that they aren't every architects dream. Though she mentions that she thought Flash neon lights would be on top of the building and I have seen that. But enough of my radio experiences.

( Story (whole story if you want to read yourself skip the part after the quotes) )

( Bad german in books in general - A new trend? )

( Shrinking Violet - Examples )

Thanks for reading. :)